POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by Eman » Thu Apr 19, 2012 2:20 pm

Hey Keith,
You're welcome. Honestly I think your poems have a lot of literary merit. I would love to have your talent for prose!! I do believe that these should be in book form (maybe even I-Books), they are actually to me that good!! Generations on end could learn from you. I've seen poems being written but it's on the "rap" music level. I tell my own nieces and nephews they need not try to rhyme by having a "hip hop" beat to write. Poetry works with other beats and measures.. :D

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by keithgood838 » Fri Apr 20, 2012 11:39 am

FROM LITERATURE'S FLORA

As propagator of seeds for a plan
for a verse book acclaiming Matt Monro,
should the idea to fruition grow,
a son of San Diego called Eman
shall be the devotee first in the know.

Keith Good

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by Eman » Fri Apr 20, 2012 1:04 pm

Thanks Keith,
That was awesome! :D

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by keithgood838 » Fri Apr 20, 2012 6:42 pm

With your permission I will update
the total to 36 now, Eman.
Thanks for inspiring additional material
for the putative publication.

:D

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by Eman » Fri Apr 20, 2012 8:08 pm

Keith :D

I've read a lot of poems in time some good, some bad, but yours I really like!!

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by keithgood838 » Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:51 pm

The sub-title of this thread has seldom
been more accurately reflected:

COMPETING CROONERS

I maintain Monro out-sings Sinatra,
though Frank created the genre template;
Matt may well have won the style gold medal
had his time to hit his stride not come late.
The Monro baritone is more mellow,
Frank's range starts about half-an-octave more;
Matt was a game-for-a-good-laugh fellow;
acting accrued for Frank a deserved score.
Matt lined up at the start to proud applause;
Frank's avid bobbysoxers came to rave;
scrabbling to find words to rhyme with Sinatra
would have consigned me to an early grave.

Keith Good
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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by keithgood838 » Fri May 04, 2012 12:40 pm

I think it's time to let Eman's laughter-split sides mend,
and enable the forum to wallow in the poetic tranquillity
of the countryside courtesy of Irish literature exemplified
by the opening lines of Francis Ledwidge's verse entitled,

Thoughts at the Trysting Stile:

Come, May, and hang a white flag on each thorn,
Make truce with earth and heaven; the April child
Now hides her sulky face deep in the morn
Of your flowers by the water wild
And in the ripples of the rising grass,
And rushes bent to let the south wind pass
On with the tumult of swift nomad ways,
And broken domes of downy dandelion.
Only in spasms now the blackbird sings.
The hour is all a-dream ...

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Post by Eman » Fri May 04, 2012 5:25 pm

Nice poem Keith! I can picture the tranquility.

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by Marian » Fri May 04, 2012 9:36 pm

Me too! :)

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Post by Marian » Fri May 04, 2012 9:36 pm

Me too! :)

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by keithgood838 » Mon May 07, 2012 7:29 pm

On recent occasions two stalwarts of this forum,
Eman and Gray, were kind enough to compliment
me on my Matt Monro verses. As a token of my gratitude,
and on the two-hundredth anniversary of the birth
of Robert Browning ('that first fine careless rapture'),
I would like to dedicate one little verse each
(I've already dedicated a poem to Marian) to my
aforementioned forum friends:

For Eman from San Diego

ONE DAY IN MANILA
(from the Ultimate Performer - Matt Monro)


Through perilous seas,
past rocks called sang and sung,
Matt keeps his ship afloat;
and with masterly ease
from the cruise is wrung
each pleasure-perfect note.

Keith Good

For Gray from Leeds

SPRING SONG
(the first fine careless rapture)


My delectable Delius moment,
like when our great music maestro
was moved On Hearing The First Cuckoo in Spring,
was as an adolescent (should that be adorescent?)
on hearing, on a radio show,
our great vocalist Matt Monro sing ...

Keith Good


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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by Eman » Mon May 07, 2012 10:39 pm

Awww thanks Keith!! Native CA here but heritage is in the Philippines. I know Matt loved it there, heat, humidity and all!!

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by keithgood838 » Wed May 09, 2012 3:15 pm

Hi Eman, clearly Manila's love for Matt was warmly reciprocated.
Here in the south-east of England, Mother Nature seems to be
taking pleasure in playing her perverse tricks on us. Six weeks
into a hosepipe ban, the rainy weather continues unabated.
It is fascinating to observe the pained expressions on the faces
of newsreaders who tie themselves up in terminological knots
with such phrases as 'the ban stays in operation while the drought lasts'.
I think we can aver that the drought is over, but the water shortage persists.
On a serious note, and before this post morphs into Today's Joke,
it is sad to recall that Edward Thomas was yet another young poet
who perished in 'the terrible rain' of the Great War:

AFTER RAIN

The rain of a night and a day and a night
Stops at the light
Of this pale choked day. The peering sun
Sees what has been done.
The road under the trees has a border new
Of purple hue
Inside the border of bright green grass:
For all that has
Been left by November of leaves is torn
From hazel and thorn
And the greater trees. Throughout the copse
No dead leaf drops
On grey grass, green moss, burnt-orange fern
And the wind's return:
The leaflets out of the tree shed
Are thinly spread
In the road, like little black fish, inlaid,
As if they played.
What hangs from myriad branches down there
So hard and bare
Are twelve yellow apples lovely to see
On one crab-tree.

EDWARD THOMAS (1878-1917)

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by Eman » Wed May 09, 2012 3:31 pm

Nice post and poem Keith. Yeah I lived in Manila for 8 years and never got use to it. Just too humid a climate for me. San Diego's climate is just right for me, not too hot or too cold. Kinda like Spain. I do love the English weather but too much rain. If I want something similar I'll just trek up to visit a friend who lives in Seattle, WA. Kinda gloomy and gray year round! I think you should visit Manila or the US sometime, Keith if you haven't been!! :D

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Re: POEMS - With Tongue In Cheek

Post by Gray » Mon May 14, 2012 9:28 am

Keith, I have just noticed your verse dedicated to me!
Oh my word, I am so touched, Keith that is wonderful, thank you so, very, very much.

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